i think maybe a comma after the first sentence, outside of the quotation marks (and after the last brackets, too!)
and maybe move the "i wonder" line and "first person true" line up? It might not matter with those
ok I did not know how much I’d have to think for this one
very iffy on the shading, but it was like my best idea on how to make Brooke more shadow Freddy without changing him too much???
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